Greetings! First I have to say that I’m not an expert myself, but I’ll try to comment if that’s okay.
Sadly, i couldn’t see the vidoe on your site. It simply didn’t load up for some reason, might be my own connection but you might wanna recheck that. But I did take a look at your other works under “storyboards” tab.
First off you might want to keep improving drawing skills. Your panels are pretty clear actually, and poses are rather good and comprehensive but that there are some issues with perspective. I’d like to link a work of yours here in order to explain, if you don’t mind:
For instance, between panels 12 and 13 the difference between top view and bottom view is not distinctive due to incorrect surface rendering. I@m not entirely sure that I
m picking the right words here so Id like to help you with a little sketch:
(i hope this works =( )
Sorry about the sketchy handwriting, it`s 4 am where I live right now.
So yeah I hope this was helpful, Sadly I`m kinda new in SB business as well, but just trying to help here.
thanks for the reply gulsievin kurtup. I could not see the image you posted. Can you post it again? here is a reupload of the video. http://winnerftw123.tumblr.com/post/149225060037/here-is-a-reupload-of-a-previous-storyboard-i-did
Okay, let me try this again.
Edit: thanks for the updated link but it still fails to load. It is probably my connection failing or something. Sorry about that.
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