Good start. I called out a few things above.
Where is my pizazz, hustzpah? wow me with some cool shots!
Opening shot couldnt be more boring with a building in the center of the frame. FG, MG, BG? you know this, you got this, burst that creative spirit onto your thumbnails.
The fighting part looks good but I am unclear who is who in the thumbs. Make sure that your intro to Kume is clear and we know he is watching the match.
Where is the second half?
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