I never got to the second page, this week was really busy. I’ll still post what I have for critique.
Decent start here. Be sure to upload higher rez images so we can see the details better.
You should also draw with a darker more bold pencil. The drawings are so light its hard to tell whats going on. Use a thick sharpie or the digital equivalent.
The interpretation looks a bit bland. This is your chance to give me a cool exciting actions scene and what im seeing looks more like a limited drama. Go for it. go crazy and see what you can come up with.
Keep going, I want to see the rest!
I like the cinematics of your storytelling. I feel like I am there. The action is a bit simplified. It would be nice to see a sword fight clink-clank etc…
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