first set of boards for 2016 I have another set I will post soon. Thoughts
For Stair Chase: Your drawing is really clean and nice, but I think you could do more with your angle choice. In general since this scene is all about vertical movement I would push your angles more upward and downward.
Here’s some specific notes:
For frame 2 – I think the image should be flipped to be moving right, since he was moving generally to the right in frame 1.
For fame 3 – Put something in the BG to establish a downward perspective. Also maybe bring a hand up into the foreground for a little more depth.
For frame 4 and 5 – I would do an upward angle to draw a clearer spacial relationship between the pursuer and the fleeing man.
For frame 6 – I think you should use, or add, a closer shot of his face reacting. And again, push the angle.
For frame 7 – The graphical elements (the vertical lines for the walls and the railing) are too similar to frame 6 and the character is too close in size. The cut might look weird in the final. If 6 were a closer shot, that would fix it.
I hope that’s somewhat helpful. I can’t wait to see more. Keep up the good work.
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