Hello guys. I hope to have your comments and critics helping me while i try to build my first Storyboard Portfolio. I´m loving this site and this community!
Here is my first piece: Audi 30 seconds storyboard from Ranna
I really like these boards, especially the Audi one. Your drawing and use use of value makes the images much crisper in that one. Since that one also has more interesting angles and compositions, it might be better for your portfolio( but I’m no expert).
I looked as some of your other stuff too, and I think you’re doing a great at creating interesting shots and you seem to be taking Sergio’s advice from his courses to heart.
I think something you can improve on (just like me) is more confident line work. In some of your drawings things look maybe too scribbly What has been helping me is drawing on paper with pen, just as exercise. That trains you to try to draw with fewer strokes.
I hope to see more updates soon.
These are captivating storyboards, the high contrast and use of values drew me in immediately. I also like the varied camera angles. I agree with David that you should go for strong lines and continue to believe in your unique voice. You’ve got great skill and talent!
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