Hi Anthony. These are really cool. I you’re clearly trying to incorporate a lot of interesting and variable angles into your story telling. That’s awesome. Just keep working on your drawing, especially perspective, to make sure all your cool angles read well.
I think you should also start drawing out your panels ahead of time (or use pre-printed pages) so you can work with a consistent frame size, and leave room for your text. That will help you work on your composition too.
Check out these notes for some good tips: http://warburtonlabs.blogspot.com/2014/01/knd-storyboards-201-part-1.html
I made a few notes on your first board as an example.
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