I spent a lot of time rethinking my shots and experimented with a few things. Please let me know if my ideas are too confusing. Again I wasn’t able to get much further than where I left off last time but hopefully my ideas are stronger this time around. All in all I’m finding this assignment very fun and it’s forcing me out of my comfort zone.
Your ideas are great, but the execution still needs work. I know this is a demanding assignment in such a short amount of time. But a well though out sequence like this can be a nice portfolio piece.
Watch out for your screen direction. Just make sure the camera is always shooting from the same side. You seem to arbitrarily cut from camera on one side, then to the other. its not super confusing since its only one character, but overall its not good shot construction. your scene should flow like melted butter.
Keep going. I would love to see the images larger with more detail to give it the right amount of polish.
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